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Man Writes Poem -- Jay Leeming

(Poem #160)Man Writes Poem
 This just in: a man has begun writing a poem
 in a small room in Brooklyn. His curtains
 are apparently blowing in the breeze. We go now 
 to our man Harry on the scene, what's
 
 the story down there Harry? "Well Chuck
 he has begun the second stanza and seems 
 to be doing fine, he's using a blue pen, most 
 poets these days use blue or black ink so blue
 
 is a fine choice. His curtains are indeed blowing 
 in a breeze of some kind and what's more his radiator
 is 'whistling' somewhat. No metaphors have been written yet,
 but I'm sure he's rummaging around down there
 
 in the tin cans of his soul and will turn up something 
 for us soon. Hang on—just breaking news here Chuck, 
 there are 'birds singing' outside his window, and a car
 with a bad muffler has just gone by. Yes ... definitely
 
 a confirmation on the singing birds." Excuse me Harry 
 but the poem seems to be taking on a very auditory quality
 at this point wouldn't you say? "Yes Chuck, you're right,
 but after years of experience I would hesitate to predict
 
 exactly where this poem is going to go. Why I remember
 being on the scene with Frost in '47, and with Stevens in '53,
 and if there's one thing about poems these days it's that
 hang on, something's happening here, he's just compared the curtains
 
 to his mother, and he's described the radiator as 'Roaring deep 
 with the red walrus of History.' Now that's a key line,
 especially appearing here, somewhat late in the poem,
 when all of the similes are about to go home. In fact he seems 
 
 a bit knocked out with the effort of writing that line,
 and who wouldn't be? Looks like ... yes, he's put down his pen
 and has gone to brush his teeth. Back to you Chuck." Well 
 thanks Harry. Wow, the life of the artist. That's it for now,
 
 but we'll keep you informed of more details as they arise. 
-- Jay Leeming

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